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RE: STORY IN FIFTY WORDS: SHADE

in #fiftywords4 years ago

I enjoyed this story, @kingspiration. I think it is true that those who have the least often appreciate what they have the most.

One suggestion for you: instead of “She smiled tearfully to himself,” it should be “He smiled tearfully to himself.”

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You are very right @jayna. I think we will find more happiness when we appreciate the many pearls life places on our way.
And thanks for drawing my attention to the error.

You have the opportunity to edit the words if it is less than 7 days since you posted it. 😊

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