A final farewell [A 50 word short]

in #fiftywords3 years ago (edited)

Hello everyone,

Since a few days I found my way back to the keyboard and I've been producing some new stories. Most of them are still in the drafting- and editing phase, but at least I got this little challenge done! The prompt for this week's #fiftywords challenge by @jayna was "pop". Enjoy!


A final farewell


A breeze blows the cocäine off my hand.
Shit.
I snort it clean and take out the bottle of pills.
Tipping my head, I pop one in and take a sip of water.
I return to the graveside whilst blowing my nose.
Pop’s coffin already buried.
Bastard never waited.


Thanks to the people over at @ink-ubator to help me with the brainstorm and editing process of this little story.

Thanks for reading and see you next time,

  • Tuwore
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Wow, emotive stuff... Drugs fogging the brain of another likely decent person.. Sad story, but oh so real..

Very nicely done, @tuwore! This is powerful. Your main character’s disposition really comes through.

Wow... Sadly gripping. Well written.

😄😇😄

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