A Broken Freedom

in WORLD OF XPILAR4 months ago

Forgive me as I keep growing tired of breathing,
Revere me for using my strength when I was bleeding,
The path ahead is unpredictable and cryptic,
Like the broken wings of a bird, useless and pathetic.


Forgive me this life of uninhibited love,
An overindulgence of unexpressed freedom,
Although I still fear of being abandoned and forgotten,
It is impossible to neglect the sorrow I've gotten all these years,
But under the vast sky, we shall defend our rights from the shears.

Many times I've faced cold shoulders and ridicule,
Never have I gave up my heart's hopes and desires,
Break through this dark prison, a fight to conspire,
Across the boundless sea, let our mind sleep in peace,
An endless cease of the dream that we shall rise for independence.



 4 months ago 


Hello @kaysmile44

Very good as always, you have a great talent, I really like reading you! I hope you continue to share your thoughts with us! Greetings!

Thanks for your support.

Hello My friends, nice to see your greats story'😊

Beautiful words ... full of hope.

Thanks for your comment.

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 4 months ago 

Strong words and music in your poem. I think in our future also, trying to imagine something better! Thank you @KaySmile44!

Best wishes for you and yours!!

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