Personal writing: The inner battle

in #poetry4 years ago

The inner battle 


People enter and leave your life, yes, it’s true 

Life carries on, you move on, you change, oh what a thought  

Everything happens for a reason but it’s hard to accept 

Life changes you for the better or for the worse I know 

I’ll never let my emotions dictate my actions no more 

My heart wants it and for that I am sure  

What the heart wants is not always for the best we know 

But my head is something that I find hard to dictate  

Life Is unexpected, unforeseen and imperfect at best 

Time keeps ticking, keeps going on, I know 

It waits for no man, theses clock will not stop 

 It cannot be stopped or wavered at all. 

It is the sweet essence of a miracle for 

They shall forever turn.     

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my power isn't much but I really like your poem.
I followed you when you commented on mine.
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I think your poems are very inspiring and thought provoking.

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Very eye opening. Great stuff

Thank you so much!!

Such an amazing deep poem! I love your work👍🏾 keep at it.

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Love this! Everyone is fighting an inner battle:) Beautifully written. Keep it up 😘 xoxo

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I love it... you're tapping into your inner strength and bringing out the words with ease. Beautiful

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