RE: Gea the traveller
After a week of receiving various cocktails of drugs, her body is ready for the trip.
This is some real attention to the detail, at least in my eyes... Pointing out that it's not just "get into time machine, get out of time machine", but it takes prep work to do that.
I always have shivers sent down my spine reading your stories, and this one was no different. It has a terrific message, great characters, the surroundings are described just beautifully and boy oh boy, do I love that there's always a great twist to the story.
I'm also, as always, left speechless by the time I read the whole thing... I know you could very much use some constructive criticism, but by the time I get to the end, my mind just goes blank and my hair stands upright, and I turn into a three year old child, trying to come up with a properly structured sentence.
Maybe the only thing that I noticed on second readin, is that sometimes you switch from present to past tense, like here:
Although she is not considered a citizen it is a great opportunity for data gathering.
She knew this is the uncomfortable part.
But other than that occasional tense mix-up... I love it.
Thank you very much for your entry!